Baby Ellie

School Writing Prompt:


“Are you my mommy?” Baby Ellie asked in her mind.
“Yes,” the device answered, “Yes, I am.”
“Then who is my father?” she wondered.
“Your father is a robot, like me,” said the device, “You are a robot like the rest of us, except you are in disguise.  You are disguised as a baby and you will grow up to be a human-looking robot.”
Confused, Ellie asked, “Then can we just be a regular family and go on walks in the park?  You know what I would really like is a pacifier and a crib.”
The device said warmly, “Yes, we can do all of that if we just get out of this room.”
Then mechanical legs and arms sprouted out of the device and with the mom holding the baby’s hand, they walked out of the room.  They left the human’s house and walked all the way to their own robot house.  As they walked up to their front door, which was made of gears, the door opened automatically. Before going into the house, they looked down to see all of the wires that help run the house.  The wires were built into the metal floor. Ellie knew that it felt nice to be home.

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  1. Lynn NadeauDecember 2, 2013 at 9:36 PM

    This is a nice story. Well written. I like some of the words you use to describe emotional states of confusion or warmth … very nice descriptions. And what a great idea that these robots can be disguised as people!

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